The Logline & Hook Audit
- Page-10 exclusion zone diagnostic
- Logline compression & commercial-engine assessment
- Hook architecture & opening-image audit
- Reader-velocity check across the first ten pages
- One round of revision-direction email follow-up
The same rigorous structural and commercial framework applied to the canon — turned around on your own pages. Every consultation is a real, full studio-grade coverage report on your script. No notes about “character voice.” No vague platitudes. The exact mechanical, demographic, and pacing audits that determine whether a reader at an agency or studio passes you up before page 15.
This office considers fewer than twelve external engagements per fiscal year. Rates below reflect the exclusivity of the framework, the depth of the structural audit, and the time required to apply it with full rigor.
All engagements confidential and subject to acceptance. Submissions reviewed by Hunter G. personally. Payment due upon execution of letter of engagement. Coverage delivered as bound PDF report on letterhead. — CW-SVC-2026
The Coverage Wonk personally — pen name Hunter G., Creative Affairs Division. Every report is written by the same reader who runs the public Index and authors the Retrospectives. No interns, no farm-outs.
No. Private commissions are confidential — never published, never referenced. The public Index covers existing studio properties only.
Then you got the same rating as Moonlight. That score reflects the brutality of the framework — not the script's actual artistic merit. The point is to surface the structural and demographic vulnerabilities a real studio reader will weaponize. You then make informed revision decisions.
Yes. Standard mutual NDA available on request before submission.
No. Coverage and consultation only. The Wonk is a reader, not a producer or rewrite hand.